A Reply(5) Poem by Akhtar Jawad
A Reply(5)
With the x-ray camera and the telescopes,
Her two eyes have so many scopes,
Here or there say anywhere
Can watch me every where,
But I am afraid of her microscopes!
Lovely Limerick reminding one of the perils of old age which has a vast scope for infirmities of one kind or the other. Thanks for sharing.
Hmm......... Oh... Akhtar ji....... My eyes are no more sharp! With age, cataract has begun blurring my eyesight! So don't worry.....................! !
Great one.., both valsa mamji and off course babajaan. Loved it
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7/24/2025 10:57:15 PM # 1.0.0
Valsa definitely have camera eyes. Nothing is hidden from her keen eyes. And your response is equally powerful. We are blessed to have poets like you and Valsa.