A Reply(5) Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Reply(5)

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With the x-ray camera and the telescopes,
Her two eyes have so many scopes,
Here or there say anywhere
Can watch me every where,
But I am afraid of her microscopes!

Thursday, December 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dangerous
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 05 December 2016

Valsa definitely have camera eyes. Nothing is hidden from her keen eyes. And your response is equally powerful. We are blessed to have poets like you and Valsa.

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Rajnish Manga 04 December 2016

Lovely Limerick reminding one of the perils of old age which has a vast scope for infirmities of one kind or the other. Thanks for sharing.

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Khalid Saifullah 02 December 2016

Interesting reply to an interesting Limerick.

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Valsa George 02 December 2016

Hmm......... Oh... Akhtar ji....... My eyes are no more sharp! With age, cataract has begun blurring my eyesight! So don't worry.....................! !

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Mithilesh Yadav 01 December 2016

Great one.., both valsa mamji and off course babajaan. Loved it

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