A Reply(4) Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Reply(4)

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The stench is coming from the south,
Can't you keep closed your open mouth,
Socks are lying in my west,
Your skirt since last fest,
Is lying here my sweet Lady Couth!

Tuesday, November 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: forgotten
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 27 November 2016

You have beaten me... Akhtar ji.....! My skirts...... I put to laundry after every wear...! They won't smell, I am sure! Real fun......!

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Khalida Bano Ali 22 November 2016

A lovely Limerick by Valsa George and equally good reply......................................

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Aarzoo Mehek 22 November 2016

A witty reply to an awesome limerick by Valsa. Babajaan you justified her writing by giving apt reply. enjoyed reading both the limerick.

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