Tuesday, November 15, 2016

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Rating: 5.0

It was just their joint venture,
Pre-planned slapping adventure,
Enhanced model's rates,
Boy got private dates,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 November 2016

Yes, planned adventure is really very amazing. Stars of new picture come in to mind and imagery. Interestingly drafted and shared....10

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Rajnish Manga 17 November 2016

Not just a reply, it is altogether a new building on an original foundation. Loved it Thanks.

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M Asim Nehal 16 November 2016

I liked the series, a wonderful response to a humorous limerick....10++

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Khalid Saifullah 16 November 2016

Two beautiful Limericks, hope it will continue..................................

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Valsa George 16 November 2016

Wow...... Akhtar ji, you really excel in limericks! This one is so fantastic......! I never thought they would make such a sneaky deal.....! Hats off to you! You deserve to be a limerick king!

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Hazel Durham 16 November 2016

A great adventure with a lovely ending, a creative reply to Valsa's Limerick!

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Kim Barney 15 November 2016

Ha! A funny reply to her poem. Very creative. I like it.

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