A Rendezvous With Repentance Comments

hey..nice you saw the night...you felt it...then you slept and when you got up, you questioned

I like the last four lines of this poem and I also like this poem.. a great piece..

You have printed the twist and turns of life in the last stanza...great free verse form woven with fine metaphors...10+++

This poemm of yours is of a different height and depth, very talented, good use of imagination and allegory, the last stanza stands out.....fantabulous write! ! ! !

the first stanza lines are equally figurative too...good piece, Sarvesh...10

this reads ur best, sarvesh...

First four lines are terrific with a metaphor. The 'night' crawls here with its subtle mind enveloped with passion...the concept is very much flowing without pause.10+

so graceful..loved it!

fantastic poem sarvesh.....nice imagery...well done.