A naive and beautiful bud,
Full of dreams and vibrant.
A sun so bold and bright,
Its golden arms give warmth.
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A sun so bold and bright, Its golden arms give warmth...sparkling poetic expression. I find much substance from these phrases, 'together they enloy' and 'the rest of the world does not exist for them'
I've had moments close to this, but few and far between, with some, maybe all, of my four wives. Maybe I'm not 'bright' enough to have enjoyed more such times? : ( bri
Love is so powerful that it makes the lovers blind when their hearts are eager to merge
A remarkable love poem that inspires me to read it again and again
Absolutely spellbinding! .. Filled with such Beauty and sentiment! .. Ever so Beyond #'S! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Beautiful love story from Mother Nature, directly. Reminded me of the famous poem "Suuryakanthi" by Indian Jnanapeeth Award winner G. Sankara Kurup.
It's really a love poem that captivates lovers who forget the world around them while their love rises to the heights of ecstasy
Rose Marie, I love the way that you've used nature to symbolise a budding romance! Absolutely beautiful!
A beautiful love poem with a nice allegory....many *************
That's what love is in truth: only for the two lovers, excellent poem brilliantly worded,5 Stars TOP Score. I have enoyed tremendously
How charmingly tender and beautiful! The very essence of purity. Unforgettable and sweet. Thank you for this glorious treat!
'Its golden arms give warmth.'---now that is a line straight out of a poet's heart---your words have a habit of whispering magic into a reader's soul--top marks