Wednesday, September 7, 2022

A Rendezvous Comments

Rating: 4.9

A naive and beautiful bud,
Full of dreams and vibrant.
A sun so bold and bright,
Its golden arms give warmth.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Susan Williams 23 January 2023

'Its golden arms give warmth.'---now that is a line straight out of a poet's heart---your words have a habit of whispering magic into a reader's soul--top marks

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 31 December 2022

Lovely imagery, Rose Marie

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 November 2022

A sun so bold and bright, Its golden arms give warmth...sparkling poetic expression. I find much substance from these phrases, 'together they enloy' and 'the rest of the world does not exist for them'

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Bri Edwards 18 October 2022

I gave four stars. ;) bri

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Bri Edwards 18 October 2022

I've had moments close to this, but few and far between, with some, maybe all, of my four wives. Maybe I'm not 'bright' enough to have enjoyed more such times? : ( bri

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Love is so powerful that it makes the lovers blind when their hearts are eager to merge

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Indira Renganathan 09 October 2022

A remarkable love poem that inspires me to read it again and again

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Rebecca Navarre 14 September 2022

Absolutely spellbinding! .. Filled with such Beauty and sentiment! .. Ever so Beyond #'S! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 14 September 2022

Beautiful love story from Mother Nature, directly. Reminded me of the famous poem "Suuryakanthi" by Indian Jnanapeeth Award winner G. Sankara Kurup.

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It's really a love poem that captivates lovers who forget the world around them while their love rises to the heights of ecstasy

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Richard Wlodarski 11 September 2022

Rose Marie, I love the way that you've used nature to symbolise a budding romance! Absolutely beautiful!

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Indira Renganathan 10 September 2022

A beautiful love poem with a nice allegory....many *************

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 09 September 2022

A truly lovely poem! It's in my List.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 September 2022

Simply wonderful Bravo Top 5

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Anjandev Roy 09 September 2022

This is a glorious piece......thank u, dear poetess....

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 September 2022

That's what love is in truth: only for the two lovers, excellent poem brilliantly worded,5 Stars TOP Score. I have enoyed tremendously

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Sandra Feldman 07 September 2022

How charmingly tender and beautiful! The very essence of purity. Unforgettable and sweet. Thank you for this glorious treat!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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