Tuesday, June 23, 2009

A Reminiscence Comments

Rating: 5.0

It’s a long while back and yet it stays,
how she draws delightful on a cigarette
and drink a glass,
of yellow sparkling st. Anna with me.
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Duh Huh 26 June 2009

She understood me for who and what I am and much more than passion can find a way to bind, I was trapped by her humanity. I really liked this poem, especially the last stanza and the last line stood to me. Very well done and thank you for sharing :)

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Tina Mathurin 24 June 2009

Looking back....without reason you may have had regrets. Very clear...thanks for letting me read this Tina

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Gert Strydom

Gert Strydom

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