Friday, January 8, 2010

A Remembrance Of My Father Comments

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I saw you as you were,
Not as the person I last viewed -
You were handsome, strong and good,
Movie star looks and a great smile.
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david lessard
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 09 January 2010

Yes, fathers do not seem to want their children to see them pass away, and I can relate to your sentiments here. In simplicity, you managed to bring out this child-parent bond in perfect harmony in this poem, with the last closing line perfect and apropos. The title itself unites the whole poem - with a deep meaning.10+++++

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Tricia Flores-Bizal 08 January 2010

Touching, as I just lost my dad to cancer in December. Thank you

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Rani Turton 08 January 2010

That voyage of discovery already seems to have started. Poignant and genuine.

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