I-N-T-E-R-E-S-T-I-N-G lol the repetion of '...a relative I've never met...' is kind of annoying. You could really have gone into detail a little more about his cancer, his experience, his wife (the Aunt) . How you felt about him dying, and not have been so monolouge about it. Great work though, I love that it's short and sweet ^.^ To the point makes people happy these days ^.^ And of course, the flow and rhyme were smooth.
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I-N-T-E-R-E-S-T-I-N-G lol the repetion of '...a relative I've never met...' is kind of annoying. You could really have gone into detail a little more about his cancer, his experience, his wife (the Aunt) . How you felt about him dying, and not have been so monolouge about it. Great work though, I love that it's short and sweet ^.^ To the point makes people happy these days ^.^ And of course, the flow and rhyme were smooth.