Tuesday, September 11, 2012

A Relationship Comments

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Love likes not
showing off relationship
smile on face or tear drops,
both make my heart rip.
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Tribhawan Kaul
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Valsa George 28 October 2013

The relationship of a poet with his Muse is beautifully described here. She comes as a puff of fresh air and leaves as a hurricane! Beautiful imagination! !

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Heather Wilkins 06 October 2012

Yet loves me so much as a princess of yore, always cruising the boat, can not navigate to shore. To bad she can't reach the shore Tribhawan. Your last stanza tells the story. great write.

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Babalola Augustine Adeola 05 October 2012

Thanks for sharing. You have just answered some of my questions

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Tribhawan Kaul

Tribhawan Kaul

Srinagar (J & K) India
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