Tuesday, April 17, 2007

A Rejuvenated You Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sit and let the world go by,
Dream your dreams, give a sigh,
Let your imagination fly,
Into directions new.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 29 February 2008

This is lovely Ernestine, A great rhyming structure, beautiful words and a wonderful flow, just excellent. Andrew x

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Duncan Wyllie 30 April 2007

A strong and beautiful piece of inspirational, brilliance Ernestine, Wow! Just take another look folks at the last stanza Feel a real contentment now, Lift way up that furrowed brow, And let all of your thoughts allow, A rejuvenated you. Now is that not a wonderful piece of positive lit Amazing Ernestine Oh! and thankyou for your advice on my last poem, you are so right, I was looking for a change in some way and you just helped me along What a STAR! **** you are Love duncan X

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Alison Cassidy 27 April 2007

A gentle assurance and love flows through this beautiful tribute to the future and freedom from the attachment of the past. Charming piece. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxx

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gone gone 17 April 2007

Ernestine thankyou for this lovely poem of hope and rebirth.... Love, D.

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Scarlett Treat 17 April 2007

Springtime, rebirth, renewal, rejuvination....and a 10 from my pen!

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