Tuesday, April 3, 2018

A Rejoinder Comments

Rating: 5.0

A rejoinder to this man
Escaping gravity pull
Finds resistance
Freedom is not
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Doris Cornago
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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 April 2018

Doris, such a great poignant poem.....10++++++

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deborrahcornago 04 April 2018

Yes, indeed. Thank you for seeing the motive behind the words. :)

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Nudershada Cabanes 03 April 2018

An insightful poem Doris. Well executed.10

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deborrahcornago 04 April 2018

Thank you, I needed that as this rejoinder can cost me a deep friendship.: (

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Doris Cornago 03 April 2018

Photo courtesy of Karnika E. Yashwant as he tries to defy gravity. Try this ttick and you'll find how truly hard it is with unwanted weight.: 0

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