Sunday, March 1, 2009

A Regular Rhyme Comments

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Iambic pentameters form a verse,
And assonating vowels make a rhyme.
The beating of my heart is echoed here:
A symph'ny played to perfect, pulsing time.
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Paul Butters
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Paul Butters 22 August 2012

I did reply to this but it vanished. Have added the apostrophe that was missing. Thanks.

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Emancipation Planz 01 March 2009

tis not trying to be funny.. Thank you for this clever verse.. but just trying to learn.. (like many others here) I count 10,10,10,11... making it irregular not regular.. (in my mind) .. is this correct.. is my count out or.. yours... should it be 10,10,10,10? I wiould appreciate if you could respond as a comment above.. so others will also note your answer...and we could all learn someting.. Thank you in advance..

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