Wednesday, March 19, 2008

A Regal Vision Comments

Rating: 4.9

At the sound of the beat of wings,
The sky with power was filled.
Geese on their long journey southwards,
In ‘V’ formation drilled.
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Ernestine Northover
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Paul Holmes 29 December 2011

Always a wonderful sight. You make me want to look up at the sky in anticipation. Another evocative write.

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David Threadgold 08 October 2008

Hi Ernestine. Another of my favourite subjects nature and you have managed yet again to portray it so well. thanks for the read Dave T 10/10

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Duncan Wyllie 01 April 2008

Your respect for natures beauty shines through Ernestine, so many times I have come to notice this WONDERFUL Love duncan XX

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R H 25 March 2008

Your words transport the reader into the sky amid the soft beating of their wings. Lovely images that linger in the reader's mind beyond the final line.j xx

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Alison Cassidy 24 March 2008

A spectacular image penned with majestic style and vision. The reader is lifted on the wings of these amazing birds through the magic of your words. Beautiful poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Lynda Robson 19 March 2008

It is indeed a regal sight, the V formation of the geese as they journey, Your poem is powerful like the beating of their wings, lovely Ernestine, Lynda xx

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