Wednesday, September 26, 2007

A Refreshing Sight Comments

Rating: 4.5

Early morning rays struggle to illuminate
As I drive around the bend of the street
Faint images linger in the quite chill of the air
A lifting haze motivates thoughts to repeat
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Theresa Ann Moore
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Kefentse Sathekge 08 October 2007

it felt, for a second or two, like i was taken back to my high school days. very vivid imagery. i love how it took me back into time. beautifully constructed.

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Thad Wilk 26 September 2007

Hi Theresa! Very nice write! lovely to read; a 10 hands down! ! Thad

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Francesca Johnson 26 September 2007

From cherished memories to emptiness to a positive note of calm. A different angle and a delight to read. Love, Fran xx

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JoAnn McGrath 26 September 2007

The cycle of things I guess: O) ...nature quiets the soul too

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Theresa Ann Moore

Theresa Ann Moore

Michigan, U.S.A.
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