! ! ! A Refreshing Shower Comments

This write opened my eyes just a little more. Thanks Bob

this poetic shower provides a refreshing outlook on life...well meaning words beautifully presented...10

dear bob.....a very invigourating poem! we draw all our energy from the five elements.we are made out of them, and go back to them.the poem refreshes all creations looking up for the rain..as usual a lovely poem.best wishes. ritty

Sounding a bugle of Change. Superbly penned. Refreshing shower on the parched land Once again the earth in new apparel stands. CP

Great use of metaphor.The first stanza is especially evocative.10, for you. Warm wishes, Sandra

words expressed are poetic!