Sunday, April 26, 2015

A Reflection Through My Eyes (I See) Comments

Rating: 4.3

I look at the sky
Wonder how tall it could be
I put my hands on my heart
Wonder how many beats left to live
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Unwritten Soul
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Rebecca Navarre 26 June 2017

Something (So) Inspiring! ! ! ! ! Sorry! ! ! ! ! About That Soul, It Missed Or I Missed That Word! ! ! ! ! Again Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Rebecca Navarre 26 June 2017

Wow! ! ! ! ! How Beautifully Deep! ! ! ! ! How Beautiful To Read! ! ! ! ! Something Inspiring! ! ! ! ! Such Beautiful Heart! ! ! ! ! Soul! ! ! ! ! Thank You So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Awe inspiring Painting Too! ! ! ! ! ! Breathtaking! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++ Added To Favs

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Unwritten Soul 29 June 2017

Thank you Rebecca :) you always give sweet words here and there, thanks :) :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 May 2017

Our life is living beyond infinity Because value of self entity is eternity.. i like these lines very much in this poem.. dear poetess. tony

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Unwritten Soul 19 October 2016

Thank you dear Christ, your words always comfort me thanks a lot :) :)

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Christopher Tye 17 October 2016

Wonderful poem, so much beauty captured in your words. It's a really beautiful painting you've used for your illustration.

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Unwritten Soul 19 October 2016

Thanks Dear Christ, thank you for those beautiful words...it show how beautiful heart you have as it reflected from your kind words on my poem :) :) Merci, Danke

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Muhammad Ali 12 August 2016

one can't read silence in the comments, this poem made me silent or short of words. in fact these words in the poem are not less than emotions or feelings and emotionlessness. Nice

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 July 2016

Day passed to night! ! Still learning the ways of the universe. Nice work.

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Mihaela Pirjol 08 June 2016

The poem and the poet's note are both great. Very wise and very true.

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Tom Billsborough 09 May 2016

the image of the air is great and the message you give important. the true remains true. I've struck gold this afternoon! But I'll have to rush back to the shady part of the garden! But be not afraid, Unwitten Soul, I shall be back sometime soon to read more of your wonderful, and wise words. tom Billsborough

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Amitava Sur 30 November 2015

Yes at last we are to live our own life as how I have convinced my own conscience. A very honest write. Good or bad, at last I am to live my own life.

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Unwritten Soul 04 October 2015

Thank you to all who commented this work, i love to see the reflection of my soul in others eyes because it can be different and how they fix us as what they believe and keep it that as they want to forever believe..thats why i love to this, it simply reflect why i name myself as Unwritten Soul..Although this is the only poem that no one votes but it is the most relatable to me than other poems. what i only care is how to live as me, underneath the name of Unwritten Soul, thanks for everyone who keeps supporting me since 5 years here. Love n peace [3

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Kelly Kurt 29 August 2015

Wow! Thanks for sharing this, Soul

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* Sunprincess * 23 August 2015

......beautiful poem, I loved every word, poet's notes and painting...and I knew you painted this, even before I see your message...fantastic job, especially with the reflections of the light, very beautiful...your talent is so amazing, dear friend :) ★ As long this heart beats still I own me to be me

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Hadil Diaf 24 July 2015

Because i loved your words, your soul and its depth, your feelings and their beauty, let me say my dear, that this is the best i've ever read, i felt it touch my soul and went through my veins..

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Hans Vr 29 June 2015

Dear Soul, This is a piece full of wonderful wisdom, written in a supremely poetic way. Each verse speaks to the heart of the reader and touches our soul. There is indeed only one to live our life and that is to be fully our self while connecting to our Creator, that eternal ethereal flow of bliss and wisdom that great spirit, we can find everywhere anytime, if we jsut try hard enough to connect...

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Unwritten Soul 25 July 2015

Thank you Hans, there is always a need for mind to speak, and sometimes art is the language... Ive lost in misunderstanding about fixed life andhow i supposed to lived by world, but i know as long i dont do wrong, i can live they way i own :) Selamat Hari Raya

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Kavya . 07 May 2015

wow trying to search for our own identity - truly said, No matter who i used to be I do own true me Our life is living beyond infinity Because value of self entity is eternity

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 April 2015

No matter who i used to be I do own true me Our life is living beyond infinity Because value of self entity is eternity.......Really. Very nicely and aptly presented. Excellent collocation. A beautiful poem I like most. Many thanks.

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Ronnie Forest 26 April 2015

What a wonderful poem!

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