I look at the sky
Wonder how tall it could be
I put my hands on my heart
Wonder how many beats left to live
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Wow! ! ! ! ! How Beautifully Deep! ! ! ! ! How Beautiful To Read! ! ! ! ! Something Inspiring! ! ! ! ! Such Beautiful Heart! ! ! ! ! Soul! ! ! ! ! Thank You So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Awe inspiring Painting Too! ! ! ! ! ! Breathtaking! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++ Added To Favs
Thank you Rebecca :) you always give sweet words here and there, thanks :) :)
Our life is living beyond infinity Because value of self entity is eternity.. i like these lines very much in this poem.. dear poetess. tony
Thank you dear Christ, your words always comfort me thanks a lot :) :)
Wonderful poem, so much beauty captured in your words. It's a really beautiful painting you've used for your illustration.
Thanks Dear Christ, thank you for those beautiful words...it show how beautiful heart you have as it reflected from your kind words on my poem :) :) Merci, Danke
one can't read silence in the comments, this poem made me silent or short of words. in fact these words in the poem are not less than emotions or feelings and emotionlessness. Nice
Day passed to night! ! Still learning the ways of the universe. Nice work.
The poem and the poet's note are both great. Very wise and very true.
the image of the air is great and the message you give important. the true remains true. I've struck gold this afternoon! But I'll have to rush back to the shady part of the garden! But be not afraid, Unwitten Soul, I shall be back sometime soon to read more of your wonderful, and wise words. tom Billsborough
Yes at last we are to live our own life as how I have convinced my own conscience. A very honest write. Good or bad, at last I am to live my own life.
Thank you to all who commented this work, i love to see the reflection of my soul in others eyes because it can be different and how they fix us as what they believe and keep it that as they want to forever believe..thats why i love to this, it simply reflect why i name myself as Unwritten Soul..Although this is the only poem that no one votes but it is the most relatable to me than other poems. what i only care is how to live as me, underneath the name of Unwritten Soul, thanks for everyone who keeps supporting me since 5 years here. Love n peace [3
......beautiful poem, I loved every word, poet's notes and painting...and I knew you painted this, even before I see your message...fantastic job, especially with the reflections of the light, very beautiful...your talent is so amazing, dear friend :) ★ As long this heart beats still I own me to be me
Because i loved your words, your soul and its depth, your feelings and their beauty, let me say my dear, that this is the best i've ever read, i felt it touch my soul and went through my veins..
Dear Soul, This is a piece full of wonderful wisdom, written in a supremely poetic way. Each verse speaks to the heart of the reader and touches our soul. There is indeed only one to live our life and that is to be fully our self while connecting to our Creator, that eternal ethereal flow of bliss and wisdom that great spirit, we can find everywhere anytime, if we jsut try hard enough to connect...
Thank you Hans, there is always a need for mind to speak, and sometimes art is the language... Ive lost in misunderstanding about fixed life andhow i supposed to lived by world, but i know as long i dont do wrong, i can live they way i own :) Selamat Hari Raya
wow trying to search for our own identity - truly said, No matter who i used to be I do own true me Our life is living beyond infinity Because value of self entity is eternity
No matter who i used to be I do own true me Our life is living beyond infinity Because value of self entity is eternity.......Really. Very nicely and aptly presented. Excellent collocation. A beautiful poem I like most. Many thanks.
Something (So) Inspiring! ! ! ! ! Sorry! ! ! ! ! About That Soul, It Missed Or I Missed That Word! ! ! ! ! Again Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++