Monday, June 18, 2007

A Reflection Comments

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My life has become a pendulum
always swings to opposite directions
running inspired yet feels desperate
void space I try to fill with substance
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Leonard Daranjo 02 July 2007

Marvin, You are not alone in your feelings. A good piece of introspection well articulated.

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As Jim said. Oh, I know just what you mean, and you articulate it with maturity and eloquence... well penned. t x

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Not a member No 4 27 June 2007

Again, Marvin, you display the admirable quality of looking carefully at yourself in order to find a way to lift yourself. Your honesty and sincerity are impressive and endearing. Your concern to do the right things, to do well, always shines through in your work and you take care to get your message across clearly. You've done that very well here. Good poem sir. Thank you. jim

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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