My life has become a pendulum
always swings to opposite directions
running inspired yet feels desperate
void space I try to fill with substance
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As Jim said. Oh, I know just what you mean, and you articulate it with maturity and eloquence... well penned. t x
Again, Marvin, you display the admirable quality of looking carefully at yourself in order to find a way to lift yourself. Your honesty and sincerity are impressive and endearing. Your concern to do the right things, to do well, always shines through in your work and you take care to get your message across clearly. You've done that very well here. Good poem sir. Thank you. jim
Marvin, You are not alone in your feelings. A good piece of introspection well articulated.