A Red Palm Comments

What is the sore light he sees?

this so lovely, wonderful piece of writing!

A wonderful story on life embellished with crystalline images with a meaningful message.

How dreams are entwined with cotton plants! The cotton plants fall with sighs to provide food and light to the family ---The struggle of life so wonderfully presented! Congratulations for this amazing poem being selected as the Poem of the Day!

You're in this dream of cotton plants. You raise a hoe, swing, and the first weeds Fall with a sigh. You take another step, Chop, and the sigh comes again, Until you yourself are breathing that way With each step, a sigh that will follow you into town.----A splendid poem!

in line 3 what makes the sound and what does it suggest?

yo mama yo mama yo mama yo mama yo mama yo mama yo mama yo mama yo mama yo mama yo mama yo mama yo mama yo mama yo mama

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Gary.

it was a great poem and very inspiring for young kids.

meow meow im a cow meow meow im a cow meow meow im a cowmeow meow im a cowmeow meow im a cowmeow meow im a cowmeow meow im a cowmeow meow im a cowmeow meow im a cowmeow meow im a cowmeow meow im a cow

thats a good poem for sure

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what i liked about the poem is that the character does the same thing like me. for example, when i feel bored i go under a tree and see the sun set down.

buncha in this place mexicans

This poem... NO words

Delightful words.

dear alexis you are my hero keep up the good work of getting plastered ;)

somehow, managed to turn a smile upside down... you reap what you sow, but you have to make the best of it, so out of it can come benefits. no matter how much of a fooled you acted then, for your family you will break your back to give them all that they need and some of the desires that they want. to make sure that your child/ren doesn't reflect the fool you acted in school, but to be the business man you are in the fields w a better tune... beauty shows its' face in many directions

Hi im Alexis ligues and this poem reminds me of the one time that i tried to be cool and took vodka to school.. which i still do. and i think this poem is great! it makes me want to get wasted

i enjoy reading something that makes me tilt me head, and just say wow