'A Red Day Latter' August15,1947 Comments

When west wind flew out! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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A nice tribute to your homeland

Thanks for sharing this poem devoted to India's Independence. You have nicely reflected the patriotic fervor and the sacrifices made by martyrs to achieve this. The poem needs some editing e.g. the title should be ''A Red Letter Day' August15,1947'. I wish you all the best.