A Recent Nightmare: (July 13th,2020) Poem by DM W

A Recent Nightmare: (July 13th,2020)

Rating: 5.0


In the vast corridors of memory,
Doors are opening to emptiness:
Where all life has come to an end;
Wastelands of unrequited desires;
Fresh blood that quickly dries
And stains old stones in the desert.
Nomadic strains of hunger and thirst;
No warm shapes, patterns or faces
Just cold, abstract notions;
Just the vanishing spectre of a rose.

Wednesday, July 22, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: despair,nightmares
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 23 July 2020

A real hard-hitter of a poem about despair and it's negative imagery, but very well done. And your end line is the brilliant dark icing on the brilliant dark cake. 10++ and added to my dark vault for an after midnight reread. Thanks again and take care.

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