A Receding River And Me Comments

wonderful....i was also flown along with every line of ur poem like a river.......targetting our aim and achieivng it though late is important and by staying calm and composed can one achieve their dreams! a superb write Sir

My targets in poetry have a specific hypothetical angle as well. Thank you Shahziaji for your comment.

you are good at composing a consistent centralized metaphor...the jubilation in the end is the fruit of staying strong at your resolution and achieving your targeted objective...