A Rebirth Of Sorts At Midnight Poem by DM W

A Rebirth Of Sorts At Midnight

Rating: 5.0


Okay my friend I'll compose a poem
In the brief hours before darkness falls.
I will paint a vivid picture of life reborn.
Hopefully, it will reflect the former radiance
Of an age that's been gradually rusted
By crude contemporaneous concerns.

The clocks will turn silent
At that interminable moment,
When what you consider to be
implacable emptiness & icy despair
will be transformed In the twinkling
Of an eye into teeming, holy vision.

O you'll learn to weave light
Into the fabric of your being.
You'll allow red needle suns, in peregrine flight,
To burst the obscene, obese balloon of now.
You'll watch it explode into a million fragments
And then see the violets of hope scatter,
And the universe explode with laughter.
In this new moment -the ghosts of longing
Will be released from the machinery of night
You will be lost in their enchantments.

Monday, April 15, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 26 November 2020

In a word. Brilliant. A great poem that is one of those rare and seldom seen things in poetry. A poem that truly captivates its reader from its beginning to its end. I so welcome the way you build and build displaying a beautifully composed towering construct. Five stars but I wish it were more for your more than fine poem Dominic. Many thanks and I wish you well.Take care. A poem with a good heart and a strong, vibrant poetry pulse.

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