Your love is like music
flowing into my cells
It evoke the emotions in me
Bursting the cocoons in my heart.
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When someone sings in love everyone wihses to be in love. If he can sing he sings, if he can paint he paints if he is a poet he writes a poem, if he can't do anything he smiles, abd that smile is a thing of beauty. Music touches the heart but a melody touches the soul. I don't know whether Rini Jerry sings or not but I know her as a poetess and nodoubt it she writes wonderful poems that touch both, heart and soul.
The clouds descend to give cover to the lovers. The flowers bloom at every note the bees make. Every two lines have some connected meaning. The matured poet has given some excellent meaning.
The music drifts through flowers The fragrance spreads in the air And as we float in ardent love The clouds descends upon us. Highly romantic Rimi Ma'am.. A great eros descends down. Keep this Meghadootam up till the rains last please. I feel the same grade of pleasure as I had during going through Meghadootam by Kalidas the great Sanskrit poet. Thanks for the sharing. A great 10++++ for it. Subhas
Thank you so much Subhas, I am glad that you felt the same pleasure while reading meghadootam. I just went through it, I enjoyed.
Sorry to have you named as Rimi in stead of Rini.. My mistake was not deliberate as one of my dearest friends has the same nick name Rini. Sorry for it.
A wonderful love poem, intensely lyrical, I love the way you have presented ur emotions, thanks for sharing.
I enjoy this poem....10
Thanks Ash.. I pleased that you visited this poem