A Reason To Return Comments

Love the intense feelings expressed so eloquently in the poem, sensuality included.

I find the substance in the last line, '...and grant me a reason to return '

Excellemt piece my poet in arms Bravo! ! ! ! !

wonderful poem A mix of moments of freedom and then a moment of uncertainty. Or perhaps there is less uncertainty and more of a woman who laid the foundations to go after what she wants.

This is the AFTER section of a BEFORE/AFTER poem with the BEFORE section subsumed in the body of the poem. The poem is necessarily intense but never shrill or obvious. That's important because you are addressing the issue of contemporary sexuality in which new freedoms lead to new complications. It's really contained in the word PROMISES: What promises, if any, come from physical intimacy? What do we do about feelings which are not dispelled by an intimate encounter but increased by it? How do we exercise our new freedoms humanely? So many questions raised by this sensitive, hones, even harrowing poem. It's remarkable!

wonderful write, a lone earring lost in tangled sheets! ! love the imagery! I love this theme..please see Right of Return and see what you think.

Great write. It is packed with emotion.

wow! ... what a wonderful emotional exaltation... a plea for the return of things that were forgotten and left behind...

Saturated with sensuality that ripples into a river of repeat.

A beautiful description of an unforgettable and emotion charged experience! Retrieving your forgotten possessions will be a genuine excuse to go back to your lover's closet once again! Thanks for your lovely comments on my poem 'The Faceless City'

So romantic feelings expressed in simple way. You don't need a reason to return when your heart is overflowing with love and care, just near silently. In love silence is louder than words, Does the tip is of any help to you? LOL. Rosia

Let me know when I might come retrieve all forgotten and grant me a reason to return I liked these lines very much

Might you have located the left behind promise we made to each other, their in the breathless hours If so...Let me know Really good to read nice soul to express