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.....super nice, this line leaves one breathless ★ I could love you so much in a heaven so glorious

It is a wonderful lyric poem.representing a moment of inner meditation, letting us into the innermost chamber of poet's mind and making us privy to what he loves, trying to establish emotional relationships with his beloved woman.The poet seems to use a harp to accompany his poem. Very well expressed poem, excellent written.........10++++++++++

this is a powerful piece.

This is beautiful, it is understanding and it is love...great write :) 10

some day for you to be by my side longing for your every touch these feeling's so abrupt there in your arms I would like to hide.what a lovely desire to be by side one day...yes and why not.. one should dream fo the future that too with beloved and desired one...lovely poem... i liked it.......10 read mine miss i miss you....a placed called home...anywhere..butter flies around

Whoa! I like it vivid language, Very deep. In ways I can compare.