Sunday, December 22, 2013

A Realization Comments

Rating: 4.8

(While lying on a hospital bed for 2 weeks)

As I lay on a hospital bed
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Mike Barrett 28 December 2013

Marvin, my wife is diabetic so I'm acutely aware of the health issues related to this affliction. A few years back she ended up with a diabetic ulcer in her right heel.....when first diagnosed we were warned that she may lose her right foot but after nearly 22 months of treatment the wound finally healed over and her foot was saved. Thanks God! I note that you're a prolific poet, I don't know that I'll find the time to review all your poems but I'll certainly be looking a a few more. Cheers & best wishes.

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Kanav Justa 25 December 2013

Being in a hospital bed is quite a warning not only for me but for everybody's' learning, , , yes thats true, , , people those who loves us are the ones who feel the pain of our illness, , , wonderful poem and a positive message in the end, , ,

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Khairul Ahsan 22 December 2013

This is a beautiful poem of original thoughts.10/10. 'for life is short that we must not abuse our human body anything in excess is not good, a realization for everybody.' Thank you for sounding this warning for your readers. You have very lucidly and elaborately described how illness can aggravate if life's discipline is not maintained. Hope you have left the hospital by now. If not, wishing you the quickest recovery and God's Blessings.

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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