Saturday, December 5, 2009

A Realization Comments

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Theres a bullet lying in my hand,
and as of now I'm hoping I wont waste it.
regrets tie my other hand behind my back.
No other way but this,
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Jessica Elizondo
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Kristi 09 August 2019

Worst poem I ever read

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Kristi 09 August 2019

It was basically rap.... not the same. You had some really good lines. KEEP THOSE! Recompose, song. However, not a poem.

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(: God's Wild Child :) 05 December 2009

lol. sorry i almost made you cry. lol. thanks sis. ya i was thinking the same thing when i wrote it. it made me think as i typed. God works in amazing ways. just not in the way we expect. I'm not saying that He'll show up in your room and slap a gun out of your hands, though it is posible, but that part was mostly the realization part meaning that we do have something to live for. i hope that makes sense lol. i just wanted to clear that up for everybody else too. but thank u.

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Serenity Prayer 05 December 2009

awesome job! ! ! ! girl, you almost made me cry. you know whats even more amazing? stuff like that actually happens. God works in wonderful ways. i mean, what you wrote isnt just a poem, thats actually probably someones life. have you ever had those moments when you feel God telling you to do something and you dont really know why He's telling ya to do it but you do it anyway? well, that poem sounds like one of those times. great job, sis =)

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