Friday, February 6, 2009

A Real Man Comments

Rating: 2.5

Here's sumthing for ur eyes to feast on.
U R a mountain a solid rock foundation.
u wont collapse for no one. U R strength u can carry the weight of the world and say hear I am give me more.
U R a gem rough around the edges and beautiful in the center.
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Greenwolfe 1962 09 February 2009

A very interesting take on A REAL MAN. I thought it was well written. Clear and meaningful. I thought the structure perhaps should be altered, but the poem will survive. GW62

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Thomas Coltrin 06 February 2009

i liked it thx.....haha jk

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