Thursday, April 12, 2018

A Real Illusion Comments

Rating: 5.0

I think of you,
My mind explodes
Inside, I feel,
Volcano glows,
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Sandra Feldman
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Susan Williams 14 April 2018

Hmmmm.... sometimes dreams are soooooooooooooooooooooooo much better than reality. Like the man below says, your reader can certainly feel the passion of this poem, my dear anarchist! 10+++++++++++++++++

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Kostas Lagos 13 April 2018

Someone can certainly feel the passion ofthis poem.Fantastic!

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Rini shibu 13 April 2018

Wonderful lines about passion

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Kelly Kurt 12 April 2018

That kind of emotion sounds wonderful. I adore many people, romance is not a factor. My limbic system occasionally releases chemicals that alter my thoughts. My rules dictate that if emotion is involved, decisions should be halted or at least considered. (May be why I am single; have been for 20 years, and may will be till I die.: -) .

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 April 2018

Short but enchanted. Beautiful poem on dream and love. Thanks for sharing.

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