Saturday, May 28, 2016

A Real Day Dream Comments

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Oh how beautiful you are my dear darling
When I first see you in spring morning.
You are at beneath big banyan tree
Where the first flush of sunrays're free.
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RAJAT GHOSH
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B.m. Biswas 28 May 2016

Beautiful....good spontaneous rhymes....some of good Ines: My stephenean mind.......second Where honesty does not pay blood for doing good Can choose freely ones lifelong pair I secrectly see the melodious maidens merrily moving As the cuckoo starts flying due to fearfear ................. I also enjoy the alliterations...and allusions.......a big100.

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RAJAT GHOSH 23 April 2020

Thank you sir...Thank u very much...

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