A Real April The Fool Comments

That was sad... its like saying don't talk about bad things, they might just come true. Preets

I liked this a lot Konjit. At first off I was warey of the opening lines as they appeared as cliche. I read it through twice more and I can now see what you are getting at. This is so well paced and begs the question is the loss of a pet equal to the loss of a human friend or relation? Is grief of the same intensity and quality for differing losses? By God! I don't have the answers, but you certainly have done a fantastic job in raising the questions. Much respect, Denis Joe

this is good. It flows well. The reader can see you and the dog and even a missing dog.

I do see alot of elements of your perspective in so may ways, relating to a dog's death (VERY SPRITUAL AND HUMAN) to the question of why other humans should die in war. Very deep and original, a lot of space to travel and for one's mind to grasp in order to understandwhere your own mind is taking us. Keep writing, refine and style to your own spirit! i admire your script here. be@peace! gcs

This poem certainly has great personal meaning and real elements, grammar polish aside.

dear person, I was saddened by your poem. Please tell how to pronounce your name, becaause the little I've seen of your work I like. Also like to keep in touch with you. Bless you, Jerry Hughes

A rather sad poem, I hope the future will eventually look up and bring both peace and love.