A Reader’s Daydream Comments

I like this piece because sometime I try and use the bigger words but it's just not me. They're hard to understand. That's just me I guess. I rather fancy the dime store words. Won't win any prizes but I have fun: O)

A softened tone to this one David, I like it! Love duncan X

Brilliant poem David. I love the way you describe the familiar feeling of sinking deeper into a particularly enthralling story and then tripping over a simple phrase and jolting back into reality. Well done! ! ! ! ! Steffi xxxxx

Immortal life - and the differing interpretations open to the subconscious mind - is massively seductive at times. Dream v reality is an ongoing war, and reality is a pretty hard taskmaster at times. A wee escape now and again sometimes helps us to cope. Thought provoking stuff David. Your words had me drifting off down that road too! ! I enjoyed this. jim

Good stuff, David... and a great ending! I stumble over words all the time (particularly big ones) ! ! Brian

Very profound thoughts David, well said Lynda xx

Very cool poem! Hugs, Dee

i loved this one david... makes you think...10