While drawing a circle,
A ray of sun that slips on your sad face
Is not only a ray, it is the light.
Moreover, my feelings
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Beautiful. poet portraits the feeling. unique piece of painting by words.
From: Randy Winehouse (South Africa ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 1/6/2010 2: 42: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: a ray of sun This is a very beautiful image, economy of words, well penned Randy
This short poem said everything it needed to convey. Perfect in style and in choice of words. Beautifully written. Very thoughtful writing! Eric
Marieta, you just warmed my heart with this piece! ! It's beautiful!
The ray of light and the feelings- both slipping into...the former into face the latter into soul...an allegorical beauty...well done Mari...10
It is heartfelt and an important comment on human drive and aspiration. Well done
poem of love, which vibrates, in the silence of the moment 10
From: Dick Badian (Netherlands ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 11/2/2009 6: 52: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: forever yours hello Marietta. I promise i will get deeper in your work. I sniffed arround.saw some beautifull pieces.so as soon as i can find more time I will dive into your thoughts. kind regards stuiterdick
I Like Your Style of Poetry... (I'm Still New, To The Hunter... But I Think You May Be One Of My Favorite Writers, Here... So, Far, I Like Everything I Read of yours... Good Write, A Nice Flow To The Words, Beautiful Phrases... Very Emotive...Nicely Done... From Sister Poet, MoonBee
A ray of sun that slips on your sad face, By drawing a circle, Is not only a ray, it is light, But my feelings, That slip in your soul Until your heart Begins to vibrate, Means all.....sun is power and knowledge... its little exposure on you mens spread of energy and light in ur thoughts and in body comepetly enligtheing you for new areas.... so wide concept in writing....welll done....10 read mine yes yes yes...yes to to...real neighbour
From: Dona Lil Antonio (Manila Philippines; Female; 29) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 10/19/2009 12: 19: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: hi ive gone through your poems they were all awesome and written in deep feelings. keep writing and keep inspiring others to make good crafts as well.
From: Alan Draper (Braunton, Devon United Kingdom; Male; 54) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 10/18/2009 9: 17: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Thanks Mari I've read your poems. You have good imagination but the poems are too serious for me. Maybe thats the way in Romania. It does have a sad reputation to us Westerners. I love laughing and challenge you to write a funny poem to make me happy. Lots of luck from your Froggie friend Alan
I think your poems are the poetic image and full of limpid words................
I sincerely hope this note finds you in the very best of health and spirits. I found this particular poem very moving and pleasing.10
beautiful poem, rays of sun is a source of energy....................
From: Divabhi 3103 (. India; Male; 20) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 9/28/2009 11: 42: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: Re: hi I commented and rated your poems. excellent poems.
Very meaningful...a gentle poetic way of expressing your love.....lovely10