Friday, May 22, 2009

A Ray Of Sun Comments

Rating: 4.9

While drawing a circle,
A ray of sun that slips on your sad face
Is not only a ray, it is the light.
Moreover, my feelings
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Marieta Maglas
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Indira Renganathan 25 January 2010

Very meaningful...a gentle poetic way of expressing your love.....lovely10

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Pranab K Chakraborty 16 January 2010

Beautiful. poet portraits the feeling. unique piece of painting by words.

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Marieta Maglas 06 January 2010

From: Randy Winehouse (South Africa ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 1/6/2010 2: 42: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: a ray of sun This is a very beautiful image, economy of words, well penned Randy

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Eric Roxas 03 January 2010

This short poem said everything it needed to convey. Perfect in style and in choice of words. Beautifully written. Very thoughtful writing! Eric

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Marieta, you just warmed my heart with this piece! ! It's beautiful!

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Kesav Easwaran 25 November 2009

The ray of light and the feelings- both slipping into...the former into face the latter into soul...an allegorical beauty...well done Mari...10

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Kranthi Pothineni 12 November 2009

Simple and short, but meaningful. Interesting write.

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Edward Parsley 05 November 2009

It is heartfelt and an important comment on human drive and aspiration. Well done

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Dierks Emerick 04 November 2009

poem of love, which vibrates, in the silence of the moment 10

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Marieta Maglas 03 November 2009

From: Dick Badian (Netherlands ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 11/2/2009 6: 52: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: forever yours hello Marietta. I promise i will get deeper in your work. I sniffed arround.saw some beautifull pieces.so as soon as i can find more time I will dive into your thoughts. kind regards stuiterdick

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Margaret Donaghy 30 October 2009

Concise but full of meaning, 10

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Moonbee Canady 26 October 2009

I Like Your Style of Poetry... (I'm Still New, To The Hunter... But I Think You May Be One Of My Favorite Writers, Here... So, Far, I Like Everything I Read of yours... Good Write, A Nice Flow To The Words, Beautiful Phrases... Very Emotive...Nicely Done... From Sister Poet, MoonBee

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Roxane Sarandon 25 October 2009

Truly poetical beauty in few words..10+++

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 October 2009

A ray of sun that slips on your sad face, By drawing a circle, Is not only a ray, it is light, But my feelings, That slip in your soul Until your heart Begins to vibrate, Means all.....sun is power and knowledge... its little exposure on you mens spread of energy and light in ur thoughts and in body comepetly enligtheing you for new areas.... so wide concept in writing....welll done....10 read mine yes yes yes...yes to to...real neighbour

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Marieta Maglas 20 October 2009

From: Dona Lil Antonio (Manila Philippines; Female; 29) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 10/19/2009 12: 19: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: hi ive gone through your poems they were all awesome and written in deep feelings. keep writing and keep inspiring others to make good crafts as well.

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Marieta Maglas 18 October 2009

From: Alan Draper (Braunton, Devon United Kingdom; Male; 54) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 10/18/2009 9: 17: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Thanks Mari I've read your poems. You have good imagination but the poems are too serious for me. Maybe thats the way in Romania. It does have a sad reputation to us Westerners. I love laughing and challenge you to write a funny poem to make me happy. Lots of luck from your Froggie friend Alan

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Jessica Hoffman 09 October 2009

I think your poems are the poetic image and full of limpid words................

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Agnes Parker 02 October 2009

I sincerely hope this note finds you in the very best of health and spirits. I found this particular poem very moving and pleasing.10

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Abigail Roscoe 30 September 2009

beautiful poem, rays of sun is a source of energy....................

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Marieta Maglas 30 September 2009

From: Divabhi 3103 (. India; Male; 20) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 9/28/2009 11: 42: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: Re: hi I commented and rated your poems. excellent poems.

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