Have you ever, he said, seen a rattlesnake moon?
Never, ever, I said. What's a rattlesnake moon?
One that captures solar light, soaking up its heat.
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I am a great admirer of Ghazals of Ghalib of India. Have you read Ghalib, Rumi, Saadi, Siraji and Iqbal?
Eloquent, lyrical and provocative. I agree with Will that you you are a very fine wordsmith. Warm regards, Sandra
Truly a delight to read: a feast for the auditor - to be read aloud. What music, what meaning - and something more. - Will
A stunning mythic vision told in the context of a fascinating form. Your companion piece, Cheesy Moon, is equally captivating.
the venom is malicious and yet sweet...........that's rattlesnake moon.....you wanted to avoid but still longing for.....great write ben!
this rattle snake gazal rattles...but happily 'the snake lies caged' inside the poem frame! ten cheers for the snake charmer poet...
I've never seen a rattlesnake moon but you've intrigued me with the notion. Lovely. Fx
definitely a different kind of mon-and i thought I knew all of its phases! ! ! ! a ten from me.