A Rare Vision Comments
On the woolly folds of sleep, I sailed to a place
Where thoughts and fancy made an alliance
A place that never existed anywhere on the Earth
And never seen or glimpsed by any human eyes
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The enchanting, mesmerizing poem transport me immediately to the dream land.Thanks for presenting us this wonderful poem.
wow beautiful imagery drawn in front of our eyes and a wonderful picture too! Thanks for sharing Mam.
Valsa! ! you made me walk every bit of space, keeping pace with you along the lines. this is heaven on earth. This is what i visualize when i do the yoga sometimes. and so doubly enjoyable. Once again you have taken me on a flight to fantasy. At least until the time i came to the end of the poem, you took me 'far from the maddening crowd' enchanting picture too..
With a lovely imagination you drew this landscape of a pleasant and a comforting space where the mind remains in peace and tranquility. It is so pleasing to read this poem what drags me to a place of joy and pleasure with a calmness. Loved it, Valsa.
Dreams take one to enchanting places. Some dreams we never remember. Some that are retained we would like to keep them long by closing eyes. Beautiful poem.
Saw Valsa in a dreamy wonder land with a deer and liked her dream......................
Beautiful poem Valsa. Amazing are such dreams. I too have tried to prolong dreams but to no avail. Wish we knew how. I believe a tranquil state of mind is what gives such experience as depicted in this lovely poem.Through your marvelous sketching we are experiencing the heaven with open eyes. Thank you for such beautiful share Valsa.
‘A Rare Vision’ is a rare vision indeed because of its rare imagery, where the heaven, with all its charm, has descended on earth. Second, the music and melody provided by the rare dreamy sequence of words. And thirdly, the impact is so profound that ‘I refused to open my eyes to detain my dream.’ Thanks for sharing the poem, Valsa ji.
Thank you for sharing your blessed dream world with us. My vision is also amazed and enriched by its tranquil beauty! lovely work!
A lovely and wonderful dream of poetess of this poem so nicely and aptly penned having attractive and heart touching phraseology. I enjoyed this poem very much with the beautiful picture provided......10
A beautiful dream that has no beginning and end to leave it ever!
Wish I could see and live in that dream world too. Nice imagery. Love it.
A lovely dream, anybody would wish to prolong before opening their eyes. I have tried to prolong such reverie after waking by keeping my eyes closed but it is not the same. Nicely shared, Valsa. Thank you
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7/25/2025 11:10:02 AM # 1.0.0
A gorgeous write that makes ones soul wish to reside in this stunning paradise. This has to be where the true spirit of beauty lies which could only be assessable through our dreams or after a pious life. I love the accompanying picture of Snow White which made me think of a pure soul.