A Random Poem About My Day In The Life Of My Mind 2.6 (C) 12-11-09 Comments

Thanks for the modest invitation! You are so young. It was Bob Dylan who did it for me at your age. Will do my best when time permits. So here goes - Above poem does not read too bad and you definitely seem to have your own style. It comes across as a dialect sometimes and then we only have to think of the likes of Robbie Burns. The content is universal and of great relevance to today. Thanks for sharing your work.

The change that we need is really somethin drastic..... ya and it is for the ral.. good composition....10 read m ine.. come out.... anywhere