Tuesday, September 29, 2009

A Random Poem About My Day In The Life Of My Mind 2.1 (C) 9-29-09 Comments

Rating: 3.5

If you licked my heart it would poison you
Feelin like a vendin machine people slide a coin in you
I love history but wish my past would just erase
So maybe I can wipe off the permanent tear tracks on my face
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Zahir Kijani
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Liz Williams 01 March 2010

was this a dream or did you wake up this intense? youre awesome.

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Nooruddeen Mm 12 October 2009

Dear Corey I have gone thru this poem I liked it Rgds Nooruddeen

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*_sakura ~daisy_* 01 October 2009

MMM.....Interesting... nice choice of words i like it^^ and tell me bout it your mind like chaos...i totally understand keep writing one at a time :)

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Zahir Kijani

Zahir Kijani

Buffalo, New york
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