A Random Poem About My Day In The Life Of My Mind 1.7 (C) 8-22-09 Comments
I keep niggas cut in half like they was in a chop site
I walk down the street daily and the sun is my spotlight
I am the manual for success and if you cool I’ll give you the recipe
So frightenin with my rhymes even my shadow’s scared to walk next to me
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That was really good. Love the rhyming and the random things that you slipped in. Definitely a 10.
wow Corey you display solid talent here I love your write--there so much randomness here
As I read this I thought this fellow needs to put this to music.I'm not into rap but I can see this set to a tune.You are a very good rhymer, much enjoyed.
A good attempt to express oneself and one's self. You are writing well. English is more in American style..
You do have a big talent there Corey.I love this writes of yours.Its very random indeed.
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7/19/2025 5:50:37 PM # 1.0.0
You indeed are the manuel of success! Very well written!