Monday, April 27, 2009

A Random Poem About My Day In The Life Of My Mind 1.4 (C) 4-27-09 Comments

Rating: 3.5

I’m Rowdy like Roddy
But not rowdier than Piper
I should wear a diaper
Cause I took a mean one on a sniper
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Zahir Kijani
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Moonbee Canady 24 May 2010

A Rap, A Reason, Your Mind Is An Intellectual-Season... smile... I Enjoyed The Little Romp Thru The Mind of Threet... So Sensitively-Sweet... It Was A Good Read... Enjoyed The Fast Paced Grab Of It... MoonBee

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Brenda Poole 14 March 2010

Corey you are good! ! ! ...your words are felt and that's because they are from your heart! ! keep it up...keep writing I love it! !

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Jennifer Kraengel 15 February 2010

strong writing, keep it up

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Jacob Andrew Jarman 21 June 2009

this is funny and yet really good

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Mona Martinez 28 April 2009

crazy poem in many way but, not bad.

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Fiona Davidson 28 April 2009

Good strong write Corey...10++

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Zahir Kijani

Zahir Kijani

Buffalo, New york
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