A Random Poem About My Day In The Life Of My Mind 1.2 (C) 3-19-09 Comments

Proper rhyme, Beautiful words properly placed. u have good writing skill.

it's brilliant because of the even rhyming and the fact that it doesn't feel like it's pushed.10+

What I like about your writing is the hip hop feel. I'm sure you do it on purpose. I can't for the life of me figure out what these poems mean but I'll read on.

when one goes into your mind, it seems like the person is hard to find for ' you are one of a kind. you put whats in your mind into rhyme and verse, you will get better but you won't get worse. ha-ha have a gr8t day little brother. p.s. i read a few of them before i decided to answer, they're good.

wow. i never seen anybody do a poem like that. that was crazy so many rhyming words that flowed so nicely into one poem.

thats nice. i'm glad you liked my poems. and so far i like yours so just kno i care and they are nice.

nice, well-done, plaese come on, boy

wow the best poem on this website

I like this Corey it sounds a bit like rap.