A Random Poem About My Day In The Life Of My Mind 1.0 (C) 12-09-08 Comments

I can imagine how it feels like to be in the speaker's shoes

I like this one, it seems kind of limited in the printed form. I hope you have had opportunity to read it outloud. It would work as a great spoken word piece.

You pull me, unseen, your words music on my skin.

GR8! luv da randomosity of it! haha lol

u've very wel crafted dis 1....... its real beuty.......

I liked the fact that this poem can relate to the majority of students nowadays. Great poem 8/10.

that was very creative, taking a simple experience an twisting it in to a work of art. Really good poem=)

you'r a great writer, you took a simple experience and turned it into a piece of art

I love this poem! : D very emotional and creative

very good poem

Creative, very creative. I like it, and it deserves to be in a book or something. I'll read more of your poems. Take a look at mine, if you can. Thx. Good Job.

very fanastic job and great imagation 10+++

AMAZING, it paints a picture in you're mind and heart...i understand this poem,

I only got one word for this poem no,1 ' Impressive'. My blood start to boil when I read this poem.

'I turn away the diamond in her blood', it seems like a random day, but to set your life to poetry cant be random, you need to reveal the source of your inspiration to help the reader to arrive at the destination with you. I'll keep reading the series

That poem is so much like you Trying to do everything at once. Yes I do the same myself You showed me that you feel like being that Race driver That is driving on the grand prix

I love the way you express yourself. I bet my son couldnt have put this better himself as it sounds like a day in the llife of his mind too.

nice work.......you know it's awful to go to school! thanks for sharing.

Interesting: | can really relate to this poem as am 13 years old and go to school...=p lol yeah good poem.

That's good work! It brought back memories of me in school. Keep writing! !