Tuesday, October 6, 2009

A Random Mess Of Randomness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pounding away my problems
is how I often solve them.
Grinding them to dust
and blowing them in the wind
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I write because I have to
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Quin Faas 06 October 2009

i forgot to mention...the last line robs! !

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Quin Faas 06 October 2009

it's like this poem has a louder than normal built in beat.....which makes it read a little faster..and it ends with encouraging you to begin again-

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Seema Chowdhury 06 October 2009

wow, a very touchy poem. this is how life is. but you will get your share of happiness too. pl see my poems dwell in my soul pg1 watch the magic happen pg3

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