A Ramble. Comments
Am I the only one, who's scared?
In fear of losing theirself, their identity
Becoming something they didn't mean to be
An anathema of their youth?
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Excellent, not a ramble and yes, have the same fears and doubts and hopes~~~~~~~~ c'est la vie, for many of us I think, as long as we feel, that is..~~~~ (avongal) marci. :)
Good stuff, Michelle... I didn't think it 'rambled' at all. Well composed and thought out! Brian
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7/28/2025 11:21:27 AM # 1.0.0
Michelle, no ramble, but the precise way a lot of us feel as we get older day by day. I could see a lot of myself in this poem. Beautifully composed and hit the bulls-eye. Top marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David