Monday, September 4, 2017

A Rainy Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

The moon is hiding
Her face veiled by thick, dark clouds
On a rainy night
Darkness wrapped the sky in black
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Nudershada Cabanes
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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 April 2022

The moon is hiding Her face veiled by thick, dark clouds....beautiful poetic expression dear poetess! A magnificent poem. Top score and to my favorite.

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 January 2020

The moon is hiding Her face veiled by thick, dark clouds On a rainy night.. poetic lines dear poetess. tony

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Chinedu Dike 26 December 2019

A concise and insightful verse. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Nudershada.

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Bri Edwards 14 February 2019

i plan to use this in the upcoming March 2019 showcase. thanks. bri :)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 June 2018

A wonderful short poem! My pleasure reading it time and again!

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Thank you Dr. Dillip for your inspiring comment

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Sheikh Shadi Marjan 09 June 2018

Excellent Expres and give 10++++++++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 June 2018

Short but expressive! I appreciate the adorable style of your penning......10

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 June 2018

well penned tanka nice 10++++

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Incredible imagery in this wonderful worded work of art! Well done!

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Robert Murray Smith 15 April 2018

This poem describes the night so poetically.

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Bri Edwards 27 March 2018

(continued) .. i want to borrow this little poem to use with 15 other poems, by 15 other PH poets, in my/our April 2018 showcase. the 'showcase' shows up on my site's list of 'my' poems, but the authors get mentioned as well...THREE TIMES each! (continued) ...

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Bri Edwards 27 March 2018

Ha! i was concerned that her was not proper for the moon. so i Googled and found this helpful and interesting information, which YOU may have already known! ! The modern English poetic usage when personifying the sun and moon has taken up the French or Romance gender for sol (masculine) and luna (feminine) , instead of retaining the Germanic grammatical genders where the sun is feminine and the moon masculine. (Ragnhild Ljosland, Masculine and Feminine in Dialect) . (continued...

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Bri Edwards 24 March 2018

it's not yet Night here, but it is RAINING! so the title drew me in. now to read it. On a rainy night.....is it the start or end of a sentence? ? even though a lack of punctuation defies my knowing the answer, it reads well either way. ;) i like it. i'll look at another.......poem...........from you. to MyPoemList. bri :) p.s. is the moon really hiding or 'just' hidden? ? ? ?

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Rebecca Navarre 10 March 2018

Very Moving! ! ! ! ! Ever Such Beautiful Sentiments Here! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++....

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Wonderful writing Nudershada 10+ Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Walterrean Salley 01 March 2018

Vivid imagery. I can see it plainly. Good job.

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Bipasha D 23 February 2018

I loved the image. Very vivid

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 October 2017

Darkness wrapped the sky in black! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 16 October 2017

A plain but lovely description. Kudos

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Akhtar Jawad 22 September 2017

Rains are beautiful and exciting but clouds come at the cost of moon and stars.

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