The moon is hiding
Her face veiled by thick, dark clouds
On a rainy night
Darkness wrapped the sky in black
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The moon is hiding Her face veiled by thick, dark clouds On a rainy night.. poetic lines dear poetess. tony
A concise and insightful verse. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Nudershada.
i plan to use this in the upcoming March 2019 showcase. thanks. bri :)
A wonderful short poem! My pleasure reading it time and again!
Short but expressive! I appreciate the adorable style of your penning......10
Incredible imagery in this wonderful worded work of art! Well done!
(continued) .. i want to borrow this little poem to use with 15 other poems, by 15 other PH poets, in my/our April 2018 showcase. the 'showcase' shows up on my site's list of 'my' poems, but the authors get mentioned as well...THREE TIMES each! (continued) ...
Ha! i was concerned that her was not proper for the moon. so i Googled and found this helpful and interesting information, which YOU may have already known! ! The modern English poetic usage when personifying the sun and moon has taken up the French or Romance gender for sol (masculine) and luna (feminine) , instead of retaining the Germanic grammatical genders where the sun is feminine and the moon masculine. (Ragnhild Ljosland, Masculine and Feminine in Dialect) . (continued...
it's not yet Night here, but it is RAINING! so the title drew me in. now to read it. On a rainy night.....is it the start or end of a sentence? ? even though a lack of punctuation defies my knowing the answer, it reads well either way. ;) i like it. i'll look at another.......poem...........from you. to MyPoemList. bri :) p.s. is the moon really hiding or 'just' hidden? ? ? ?
Very Moving! ! ! ! ! Ever Such Beautiful Sentiments Here! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++....
Wonderful writing Nudershada 10+ Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken
Darkness wrapped the sky in black! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Rains are beautiful and exciting but clouds come at the cost of moon and stars.
The moon is hiding Her face veiled by thick, dark clouds....beautiful poetic expression dear poetess! A magnificent poem. Top score and to my favorite.