A Rainy Day Comments

THIS IS A VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM. I LIKE THE POEM POEM.THE POEM DESERVES 100/100.

I love rainy days. This is wonderful the way you describe it...great poem!

I can hear the rain singing now and it beautiful voice come from this poem, i thought it came from the rain hahaha i mean this writing really has something cool inside, like the rain offers to the ground.. :) Keep it up my friend_Unwritten Soul

This is a really good read thanks for the invite :)

Rain lashing everywhere... al-muzzammil hain shabd yahan bheege palken laut ke aaye kahan kabhi to damaan me aaye ek nayi kashmakash yeh farmaan, yeh baarish ek aisi aaghaaz hai ye jabaaz boondo ki awaaz, yeh chamakti bijli yeh bheega chaman, yeh bheega aasmaan, paimane-dil aur dastaan-e-ruksaan....bas yehi to hai sab kuch, yeh lehre, yeh shabd, yeh shakhs, yeh aashiqana manzar jahaan wonderful..rain could not have been more beautiful with incriminating diseases and insects and muds and obstacles and water logging than your views together.

Great story. I felt like I was on a journey with you. I love the prose with which you describe the rain, sun and what it felt like. Very well done. Brava

Mother Nature manifesting itself in many forms and reflected in a thought provoking way through your well penned and poignant poem! Thanks for sharing and keep inspiring the World with your talented works! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

A great poem Mohammad..with beautiful crafted words..a great insight to be able to write this.. a 10 Thnx for sharing.

A great poem Mohammad..with beautiful crafted words..a great insight to be able to write this.. a 10 Thnx for sharing.

wow, that's one of the most enjoying poems i've read well done, keep it up

Omg what a great imagination.. I really felt that I'm already in that risk.. It's awesome +10 :)

Mohammad I have just read 'A Rainy Day' one of your new poems... I am very delighted and very impressed at your style... (The wind and the rain forming a partnership of comfort) .... Some great thinking and surprising reading... I like it a lot... I will look forward to reading more of your work..... Thanks for asking me to read and reply to you........... Hope you enjoy a fun weekend........ Jim Troy

Nice lines depicting the beauty of rain. If you replace 'culmination' (in the first line) with 'summit', it will be more expressive still I liked and gave it 10. Thanks for sharing.....

Nice poems man. I especially love this one. Keep the good work up. Read Regret in still flow and tell me what U think.

nice lines.... In haste the wind came to the cloud, And against the sun, they conspired, And were keen to cow down his proud, To all the vapours, the wind conspired, Bewildered I turned my head up and ken, The weather changed at all of sudden. using conspired two times in the same stanza could have been dispensed with.... over all v good :) sat

This is a poem that remind me to the beauty of monsoon season.... especially for the farmers.... Effortlessly beautiful poem in wet season...! ! ! Well done, my friend.

True true... i agree whatever you have said here...A rainy day can bud many ideas and you made yours in very bright one! ! _Unwritten Soul...

Nice words poet, I can see the picture of the wet season in front of me by reading your lines.

This poem is beautiful than the rain itself. Great imaginative skills are exhibited. Nice poem. I give full 10 marks.

The poem describes the history of a rainy day. A beautiful phenomenon of nature has been beautifully presented