A Rainbow Of Life 🌈 Comments

This is really a beautiful poetic expression... so well penned. Before the final ring of the morning bell Wipes off our love story by first sun rays. Let us make the rainbow of life🌈 and complete another fairy tale....these words really beautiful.

Awesome poem. With all colors this Rainbow of life remains unlike the Rainbow which flashes and is gone.

Excellent poem Let our dreams fly with the fragrance of rose. Let the river carry our emotions to the sea where umpteen wishes Waiting to embrace our love.

Wonderful poem. Let our dreams fly with the fragrance of rose. Let the river carry our emotions to the sea where umpteen wishes Waiting to embrace our love.

You have scripted here a wonderful love story with romantic overtones! Really enjoyed reading and rainbows flash through my mind!

This poem is of course splendid. I have rated full stars for this poem. This poem seems to be vey deeply philosophic to my eyes. Thank you very much for writing the beautiful poem full of colours of rainbow. Life should be like a rainbow. Love should flow and float in both dream and reality.

In one of your poems you have mentioned earlier to become fragrance of rose, the most holy flower in Islam. I have remembered back it here. You want to become fragrance of colorful rose and reflect love. River embraces the sea and love embrace mind. First sunray is going to kiss the lovable love. Wisdom of Allah the first sunray brings. When wisdom we get as love of God, we are enriched.

I recite the Holy Qur'an's Surah Al Fathir, Chapter 35 verse 27 where it it is mentioned about the colours of wonderful mountains and we feel the rainbow merged in mountains with white, red, many diversified clours, black and white and more and more. Allah sends water from sky and sun rays from sun. Wonderful colours are formed in Earth. We see the beauty. We feel the beauty.

To attain love of Allah one has to become good whether it is day or night. There is always play of hide and seek at day and night and at our actions and reactions. Rainbow is colourful. Rainbow carries all colours of love and relationship. Reading your poem I visit the scenic beauty in mind about Rainbow Mountains, located in China’s Zhangye Danxia Landform Geological Park.

The motivation of bringing love within life to bear the fruit of positive action is reflected in rainbow. For me this poem seems to be philosophical but for some this may be a love poem. No doubt this a love poem but I relate this to lovable mercy of our Allah, our Almighty father. We have to be good and lovable because Allah always loves goo things (Surah Baqarah 2: 195)

Excellent poem Let our dreams fly with the fragrance of rose. Let the river carry our emotions to the sea where umpteen wishes Waiting to embrace our love.

Lets play the game of love tonight. Lovely poem.

Superb Before the final ring of the morning bell Wipes off our love story by first sun rays. Let us make the rainbow of life

Playing hide and seek Under the moon light Flying roses Flowing emotions Rainbow In the mind of readers Great Asim ji

Beautiful. Ummm...hopefully she did not forget the pill. Great expressive poem

A colourful poem my friend! Loved it.

Purely imaginative flow of thoughts drenched in syrup called love overflowing like nector.