Saturday, August 10, 2019

A Rainbow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Have you ever seen
A rainbow over the mountain?
It is like a crown
Put on its tip
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Sandra Feldman 28 June 2020

What a tenderly beautiful thoughts. Written impeccably. In whose beauty and sweet description, one could certainly and willingly get lost. Very, very attractively, unforgettable. Love it! To my poem list, immediately, can't lose that rainbow.

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Kesav Easwaran 23 February 2020

Beautiful poetic expression on the rainbow. Both stanzas provide excellent imagery 10+

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 September 2019

It is amazing how a poet sees things different from what most see. A rainbow like a crown worn, or a ring given by the lover. Beautiful, rains, called megha in Sanskrit can be imagined as the lover sending a special ring for Earth, an eager bride, that he showers with his love.

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Nice environment, feeling pleasant to read.

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 August 2019

Excellent poetry. A very astute comparison between true love and rainbow. Simple and beautiful. Loved it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 August 2019

Comfort and beauty! Colours in unity; Muse of the Rainbow. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Prabir Gayen 17 August 2019

Finely crafted imagery...very sweet poem dear friend...///

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Kostas Lagos 14 August 2019

A spectacular poetic description of a rainbow!

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Akhtar Jawad 13 August 2019

A wonder romantic description of rainbows, imagining it as a crown or an engagement ring are the lovely poetic ideas. Well wrote Rose, a rose among poetesses.

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Sandra Feldman 13 August 2019

No, I have never seen a rainbow as spoken of in this lovely poem. I love rainbows and you poetic vision of them enlarged mine and gave me an unforgettable vision of love and beauty in nature's arms. See, what excellent poetry can do. Thank you, dear Rose Marie.

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Celyfer dalire 11 August 2019

What a beautiful poem po :) keep it up

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Anjandev Roy 11 August 2019

A symbol of promise......great piece. Thank u, dear poetess.anjandev roy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 August 2019

A symbol of promise that/He will come back again and again/Giving comfort and beauty.......powerful imagination! A wonderful poem so beautifully penned................10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 August 2019

An excellent expression, dear ate Rose....10++++

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Jane Campion 10 August 2019

Great imagery and imagination. I have seen double rainbows.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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