A Rain, Let It Pour To Here Comments

Like the pouring rain, your love for your sister also pours down in torrents! I can hear the throbbing of a loving brother's heart filled with so much love for a sister, far away! How you treasure all the things that once belonged to her! A poem so warm and tender!

beautiful expression of passion. Best wishes. write more.

A touching poem with a deeper meaning... Love it!

A touching poem... great job!

I believe the poem speaks about something beyond daily love but may be it is about faith. sometimes we can feel the abandonance when our wish is not become real and what we want beyond reach. Sometimes inner believe will provoke self-submission to the highst power but sometimes our dark side will put the sincerity barrier since we expect what we want from the God for our devotion..... and it is untrue love towards faith. Excellent.