Sunday, June 7, 2009

# A Rain Drop In A Child's Play Comments

Rating: 4.6

The old grandpa of the house
sat in the courtyard of the house
that old house's open courtyard
with slant tiled roof on all four side
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Krishnarasa Seshadri 16 February 2010

Its such a sweet poem! ! ! I don think anyone should stop children from playin in the rain!

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Patti Masterman 31 October 2009

Children and rain are natural friends. Unusual story pitting the will of Grandpa and the rain against one another.

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Mubeen Sadhika 30 September 2009

Good thinking. nicely expressed. great narration.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 22 June 2009

A humorous theme put in words very elegantly. The interplay between nature and the imaginative heavenly characters that played role in this beautiful poem is just splendid....... Regards Naseer

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Carl Harris 20 June 2009

This is a nice and humorous poem, samanyan, and certainly gave me a smile today! Carl.

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Imaginative, interesting and humorous poem Samanyan. Thanks for sharing your wit! 10 Karin Anderson

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Surya . 19 June 2009

witty and amusing.every man has a naughty child in him, and yours have come down.lovely voted10 surya

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Lady Grace 19 June 2009

children usually play when it rains..buit i think this is not the case..i think the humor here is how the weather was to be reported..grace

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Naidz Ladia 18 June 2009

owwwwww, a humuros one ha..well, it is nicely done wth simple tenses all over the raindrops of weather bureau..lolz

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Pandian Angelina 18 June 2009

'taking part in a child's play is eternity landing on a tree and being of use is mere duty falling on to the ground and drying away is fatality' When wisdom drops like gentle drizzle From your thoughts, It leaves me wondering Is he a King from one of my grandma's tales Is he the Solomon Sheba seeked He understands not just the birds and beasts But, talks to Raindrops as soon as finishing His talk with men and God on equal par, So beautiful you leave me spellbound! Angel

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~ Jon London ~ 18 June 2009

Sam, this had me smiling all the way through...such a pleasure my friend to read....utterly enjoyable...thanks for the share

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Fiona Davidson 18 June 2009

delightful piece Samanyan...enjoyed the read...10+++

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Smiley Hooker 17 June 2009

This is so funny and playful piece, Sam. Thanks for making me smile: -)

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Priyanka Bhowmick 17 June 2009

a sweet piece filled with humor...

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Kesav Easwaran 16 June 2009

interesting write...amusing to read...thanks

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Mamta Agarwal 16 June 2009

what an enchanting poem., narrated with humour, good imagery and irony. i really like it so much for the truth it unfolds and the fun way you tell it. great Samanyan. goes to my fav list 10++ Mamta

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Indira Renganathan 14 June 2009

You have a different great thinking....Just blot the rain dropp with the news paper to wet it thouroughly so that weather report turns to be more favourable...a poem with fun and truth

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Indira Renganathan 14 June 2009

You have a different great thinking....Just blot the rain dropp with the news paper to wet it thouroughly so that weather report turns to be more favourable...a poem with fun and truth

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rago rago 11 June 2009

you have well penned of a good story............

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Ramesh T A 11 June 2009

Nice story of rain dropp reminding one of a moral story coming in the Chandamama magazine!

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