A Radiant Light Comments

You made the point in your poem that flowers don't last forever.

This is a wonderful metaphorical poem... ''Thou wert all the way, a radiant light''....... lovely to read............. 10+++++++++++

Thou wert serving to eyes and every heart. Rachel Ann Butler

As Karin says this piece is poignant, touching ans shows a deep sense of empathy...good write Ravi

This has been written with so much empathy and your first stanza is so poignant and equally touching. In a more told worldly language you have brought in glorious imagery to crystalize the Radiant Light of her spirit. 10 love Karin

when talent dies we feel very lost....a hearfelt write

this poigant poem about a young girl is heart touching. a good work indeed as expected from ravi, thanx for sharing voted10 surya

tho sadness is in the theme but it is nicely expressed..

Words are very heart felt. Tragic life ending in it's birth

yea very touchy! nice phrasology you penned! 10+

It is a deep and striking tribute, elegantly written.

very deep expressive and illuminative writing! like Bach Cantata on poetry!

the death of someone so young is always very sad....i can see she was a beautiful girl... and a beautiful soul... very touching.

A stirring Poem, hard to keep my composure - I am totally enthralled by your use of words – they linger on in the mind and draw me back to read once again - a wonderful tribute to youth and beauty

A beautiful, touching and a radiant tribute! 10! -Raj Nandy